30/03/2011 · 8:37 am
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MAPLE DREAMS AND SURREAL THEMES


30 march 2011 = 11  adjustment/justice

Poetry month comes to its end today... Thanks NaPoWriMo 
for supporting this months experience. I feel wealthy
in word and spirit.
maple dreamin
 slumber glides the dream in surreal streams
 fills the room chases out the real
 for the new reel of dreamtime

Seconds of hours roll between fluttered eyelids
beam a story told in staccato
Slow motion carves a view of you over there
over there then. over there in the nowhere
of surreal streams of dreams that tell a story 
of the reel of the dream in unreal time
 fluttering between my eyelids dreamin the dream

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8 responses to “MAPLE DREAMS AND SURREAL THEMES”

  1. Lynn Fisher
    30/04/2011 at 9:59 am

    Beautiful poem…congrats for being the site of the day and for writing to the END!!! It was hard wasn’t it?

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  2. mamma
    30/04/2011 at 2:47 pm

    Like! 🙂

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  3. dsnake1
    01/05/2011 at 9:31 am

    a lovely poem to end NaPoWriMo.

    and congrats for being site of the day. 🙂

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  5. Tally
    01/05/2011 at 7:34 pm

    Congrats on being the site of the day, love your poem it’s perfect reading for the mood I am at the moment.

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