MAPLE DREAMS AND SURREAL THEMES

30 march 2011 = 11  adjustment/justice

Poetry month comes to its end today... Thanks NaPoWriMo 
for supporting this months experience. I feel wealthy
in word and spirit.
maple dreamin
 slumber glides the dream in surreal streams
 fills the room chases out the real
 for the new reel of dreamtime

Seconds of hours roll between fluttered eyelids
beam a story told in staccato
Slow motion carves a view of you over there
over there then. over there in the nowhere
of surreal streams of dreams that tell a story 
of the reel of the dream in unreal time
 fluttering between my eyelids dreamin the dream

8 responses to “MAPLE DREAMS AND SURREAL THEMES”

Lynn Fisher

30/04/2011 at 9:59 am

Beautiful poem…congrats for being the site of the day and for writing to the END!!! It was hard wasn’t it?

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- geezergirl1
  
  01/05/2011 at 9:54 am
  
  thanks Lynn. It was good writing to the end and now.. I have the fever to keep it going. how ’bout you?
  warm regards …
  
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mamma

30/04/2011 at 2:47 pm

Like! 🙂

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dsnake1

01/05/2011 at 9:31 am

a lovely poem to end NaPoWriMo.

and congrats for being site of the day. 🙂

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- geezergirl1
  
  01/05/2011 at 9:53 am
  
  thanks. I didn’t even ‘get’ they did that till you told me. super nice.
  I’m bloggin’ my way to your blog right now.
  
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fatfeministactivistart

01/05/2011 at 1:20 pm

Good work woman…

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- geezergirl1
  
  01/05/2011 at 8:29 pm
  
  Thanks Brenda.. howz life in your side of A2?
  
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Tally

01/05/2011 at 7:34 pm

Congrats on being the site of the day, love your poem it’s perfect reading for the mood I am at the moment.

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