MAKIN’ UP SOME OF THE BLUES


Morning on day 4 of poetry month.  Hope you’re all sippying the coffee to get your day started or what ever is the ritual that gits yer git go going.  By now, you know .. coffee seeps into my blood stream every morning. Strong and dense.

The prompt today is to write something bluzy.  There is  a form to a blues song and I’m gonna do my best to get all lyrical and clever here…

 

There’s no tellin’ if I’m gonna let you in

There’s no telling if I’m gonna let you in

Baby you ain’t givin’ me enough where you bin’

 

Talk don’t make enough for my needs

Talk don’t make enough for my needs

Speak to me how life makes you bleed

Cause

Baby you ain’t givin’ me all your sin

Baby you ain’t givin’ me all your sin

I want more heart before I let you in

 

Don’t make no difference if I rattle your cage

Don’t make no difference if I rattle your cage

That cage don’t make you on my same page

Cause..

There’s no telling if I’m gonna let you in

There’s no telling if I’m gonna let you in

Some sins just let me know where you bin’

 

There ain’t no telling if I’m gonna let you in

 

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3 responses to “MAKIN’ UP SOME OF THE BLUES

  1. Your photo could be the view from my porch. Love it…and the poem!

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  2. Nice and get on with your bad self

    See that you had fun with this prompt. I seldom do a prompt…but played with this one

    Regards,

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