day 15 of NaPoWriMo…
A Pantoum
I swim in history’s stories
in float with face to the Sun
Visions in clouds of Heaven and Earth
My sea gives way to sadness
In float with face to the Sun
The dive to deep finds my wounds
My sea gives way to sadness
Allowing the moments to come
the dive too deep finds my wounds
The salt washes me clean
Allowing the moments to come
My grief pulls me down
The salt washes me clean
Purifies the closing passage
My grief pulls me down
The journey has a new beginning
Purifies the closing passage
vision in clouds of heaven and earth
My grief pulls me down
I swim history’s stories
Jeanne Adwani ~ geezer girl 
Isn’t this a clever and wonderful piece of writing!!
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love!
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Lovely done. Write more it will help…
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thank you… I really love writing Pantoums… they give a surprise in a certain way at the end. I deliberately try not to remember the sequence so I don’t make sure the last four lines are a mystery for me.
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